Recently
with the implementation of Curriculum 2013 raises some pros and cons . This is
due to government policy is not made in accordance with expectations and the
real conditions on the ground . The teachers designated as curriculum
implementers are confused by the implementation of this curriculum in 2013 .In
practice , the implementation of the curriculum in 2013 , many teachers found
few complaints . Some complaints can be known through the teacher resources are
compiled in the following explanation : First, teachers difficulty in understanding
the core competencies ( KI ) and the Basic Competency ( KD ). Second, teachers feel less trained to implement
Curriculum 2013 in activity of learning. Third, the existence yet syllabus
final causes difficulty in making RPP. And the foorth is complaints about the
sequence of lessons. In fact , because of differences in ability and knowledge
of teachers , not all teachers are able to develop learning activities that can
facilitate students to observe phenomena that occurred related to the lesson
material . This is one of them which is a bottleneck in the
implementation of the 2013 curriculum Therefore , it is necessary for
each school held activities : first, lesson study or workshop that
discusses how learning activities that are intended to teach the
curriculum in 2013 .The second is the meeting between the schools that
have implemented the curriculum in 2013.
I think your writing is not bad. I suggest you to more give attention in typing, and it will be better if you use English term to your writing.
ReplyDeleteGood writing. i think you should give a conclusion to your paragraph.
ReplyDeleteGood writing,you did not start the paragraph with topic sentence.maybe you can start the paragraph like" chance of curriculum will make all of teacher confuse to implement.In fact,recently..........continue
ReplyDeleteit was good to read your writing.
ReplyDelete"Recently with the implementation of Curriculum 2013 raises some pros and cons." that is your first sentence on your paragraph, I think if you use it as the topic sentence you need also to explain the pros and cons on your writing.
thank you.
@Yusnida Firdaus : Thanks a lot sister, and I will doing your suggest in my next writing :)
ReplyDelete@Julia Amrina : Oke Ms Julia Amrina, many thanks for your correction, I will do an editing in this paragraph with a conclusion, and thanks for your comment :)
@na nik : it's okey Ms Nanik, thanks for your comment and correction, and I will use your suggest sentence in my next writing :)
@Lusia Choirunnisa : it's a very good correction for me. thanks Ms Lusi, I will edit my paragraph according to your comment as well as possible :)